A Fairy Tale Script

Here's the next script. The Fairy Tale chosen is The Battle of the Birds. Like before, my script is under the cut.

Week Two

Written Script for the short story The Night-Born by Jack London

(under the cut to prevent stretched posts)

For Week One - Notes

Hell on Earth: odd how every panel is a close up, more interesting once the panels break the layout

Nightwings: as a female I am clearly not the intended reader.

Frost and Fire: but why did Lyte get upset with Sim for doing what he wants when they met so recently. She was fine a page before? Also, hilarious that Sim gets more muscly every time he's being more heroic.

Merchants of Venus: Paneling is sort of interesting.

Demon with a Glass Hand: Layout is most interesting so far

The Magic Goes Away: I am learning fast that I really do not like flashback panels that are the character's floating head around a crazy-colored background.

Sandkings: if you squint, all the colors kind of muddle together but not in the nice color scheme kind of way. Any text on a bright, fully saturated yellow background is very difficult to read.